Gotta wonder why you're asking car guys about your song... You can't really say everything is you, cause the electronic drumbeat isn't really you. Unless that's a real kit, it would sound funny, and I'd have to remove my foot from my mouth. Honest opnion: It's boring. Also, you really need to be stronger with your voice. don't whisper it, you'll get such better clarity and power if you sing louder, then just mix it down how you want. It just sounded weak to me, I imagine it does a pretty good job of wooing girls though. I just play drums and do a little bit of vocals, so if you disagree with me just don't take to heart what I said.