No criticism, just advice. Don't coast through the kink on the back straight at Streets. Get the braking done and drive through on the gas. In general get your braking done and then be back on the gas earlier then you're doing. You should be using the throttle to drive the car through the corners. Squeeze the throttle and give it a 3 count (say 1 Mississippi, 2 Mississippi, 3 Mississippi out loud) and your should be foot to the floor at the last Mississippi, but NOT before. So its:
1. Brake hard and with determination.
2. Slowly trail off the brake as you turn in.
3. Pickup the gas and start your 3 count.
4. Apex the corner between the first Mississippi and when you say "Two".
5. Keep squeezing on the gas and exit the corner.
If the car steps out at turn in under braking, you broke too late or you held on to the brake pedal too long. Squeeze off the brake pedal.
If the car pushes on corner entry at turn in, you've carrier too much speed or popped off the brake pedal. Brake more and squeeze off the brake pedal.
If you can't pick up the gas before the apex then you've either apex'd too early or carrier too much speed into the corner, turn in later or brake more.
If the back of the car gently steps out as you pass the apex, stop squeezing on the throttle but don't lift, counter steer.
If the back of the car suddenly steps out as you pass the apex you've picked up the throttle too hard, squeeze.
If the car pushes out to the corner exit you've carrier too much speed, brake more.
If you have to pinch off the corner exit, you've apex'd too early, Turn in a 1/2 second later.
If you have room on corner exit you broke too much. Brake less.
If you just about drop two wheels off on corner exit (it scares you) then you've done the corner correctly.