I think this is the type of curiosity and thinking that we welcome at HybridZ.
Looks good to me, at a glance. I would call those "torques" and not "moments", but that's nitpicking. Luckily, designing brakes isn't as complex as engines or suspensions.
To dial in the balance mathematically, you need to now the friction force between the tires and road, vehicle weight, wheelbase, CG height and CG longitudinal placement. With that said, our car is already designed so jumping in and finding optimal balance empirically makes more sense, especially given the lack of info on CG locations and tire data. Brake force needed can then be back-calculated to see how much pedal force is needed, knowing tire, rotor, and piston sizes, and pedal lever ratio.
The Brake Handbook by Fred Puhn is cheap and a good read, if you're interested.